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Title: The Traitor and the Dream Follower
Pairing: a traitor and a dream follower
Summary: Sometimes, people just need sleep.

The fingers buried under the airplane’s dark-blue blanket are squeezing the hem of the black velvet jacket as their owner soundlessly sleeps in his seat. His pose seems uncomfortable and some energetic kid that sits beside him keeps turning around as his small DS lies forgotten on the floor when he presses his nose against the window; yet the slumber in which the young man has fallen is too deep and positively dreamless to notice anything that happens around him. He’s been too tired these days, months, probably, years, and the lack of rest mercilessly shows on his face.
Let him sleep, yet, a mother whispers to her fidgety child, silently staring at the familiar features of her long-dated crush. It has been three years and four months since she has taken a liking to that boy band and now, when the group’s lost one member, she’s a little disappointed. Because it means that the stylish and unreachable world of popularity and idols has its own problems and outcasts just like any other reality does.
But the woman, already not young, yet not really old, has to frown disapprovingly and lose her trail of thought when the stewardess suddenly appears out of nowhere to tell that they're soon going to land. She leans unnecessarily close to the idol and gently shakes him by his shoulder; in her vision though, the lean and small feminine hand turns into an ugly shovel that tries to wake the deadly tired guy by giving him a box on the ear. He’s woken, his eyebags make both the stewardess and woman inwardly cringe, yet he embarrassedly smiles in gratitude and they’re both dazzled; that is not a part of his work, it’s his natural weary beauty. Even though he seriously doesn’t look his best at the moment.
He shyly thanks the girl who carefully suggests him a glass of water and he very politely but firmly rejects her, indicating that he wants her to leave, which she does without a single word uttered. He mumbles something about damn flights and stupid sleeping pills and starts to fidget in his seat, adjusting the clothes under the blanket and moving forward to get his small bag from under the front seat. At some point, he catches the sitting next to him woman’s glance and smiles at her, saying something about her fidgety son; she doesn’t hear him, she’s too far gone, remembering how she has once hoped to marry him. The ultimate embarrassment takes over her and she’s flustered, thinking that wishing for something like that was stupid.
Because this man can only co-exist with someone who can be on the same wave with him.
♪ ♪
Jin is standing in the doorpost of his hotel’s bedroom, silently examining the body that lies on his messed up blankets. He nervously licks his lips and, with quite a difficulty, gulps down the lump in his throat. He’s here. He knows it, he has been told and he has noticed an unpacked suitcase at the door; he has even stumbled over it in his hurried steps to see if that wasn’t a joke.
It really wasn’t. Having fallen right under an opened window, dressed only in his navy blue briefs and wrinkled flannel shirt, Kazuya is sprawled over his bed, face down, snoring into the pillow, as if in effort of inhaling someone’s missed scent. Curtains of common pastel color waver when the chilly wind sneaks through the opened sash and the seeming to be dead awkward body shivers and gropes for any kind of cover; instead, the sleepy guy unexpectedly reaches for a hand that grabs his pale one, squeezing it among the sunburned fingers, pressing it into someone’s chapped lips.
Kazuya hears a distinct sniff and cough that totally gives the other out; the older man is trying so hard to suppress the tears. At this moment, at last Kazuya can relax, his heavy limbs feeling as if leaden and he smiles sleepily, mumbling something about how stupid Jin is and nudging the emotional boy with his heel. One moment of lost warmth and loudly echoing sounds of opening zippers and tinkling belt buckle and Jin is back into the bed; the man pushes Kame further into the sheets, quickly attaching his chest to the guy’s back, his janji pendent slightly hitting him on a random bruise on his shoulder-blade. Kazuya cringes and elbows Jin, yet it doesn’t stop the man’s hands from messing his locks fiddling with the new unseen hairdo. It doesn’t stop the lips either, as they try out the taste of his neck, slowly and carefully as if afraid that his senses have forgotten the original.
Jin doesn’t mind the next rough move when Kazuya grabs him by his hair, pulling at it, annoyed that the now short curls tickle him. Jin enjoys the way Kazuya sighs exasperatedly and turns around, his barely opened eyes too sleepy to comprehend what’s going on at the moment. Jin’s lips stretch in a huge goofy smile as he animatedly undresses the flannel shirt off of his lover and in a series of small tags, pulls his briefs away.
They’re both too tired for even thinking anything even distinctly perverted as Kazuya falls asleep almost immediately with Jin’s taste in his mouth, and Jin starts snoring into Kazuya’s chest, the boy’s waist squeezed in a death-grip between his hands.
The traitor and the dream follower can talk later. Now, they’re just two people in love who want to sleep.

It just might be continued)

on 2010-10-24 02:49 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Can I claim a spot!? *puppy eyes*

on 2010-10-24 02:52 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Oh my god, how unexpected O_O

Yes, of course, yes.

Your heartie, baby)

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on 2010-10-24 03:00 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
A-ma-zing....!! *sighs*

You really know how to make a comeback into my life, honey...! I really missed you a lot toevenstartputtingitintowords... *breathes in and out* I really really missed you...

And this story... I almost forgot how great you write, almost thinking as if it was some sort of dream. But here you are, just proving me yet again why I fall so hard for your writing style...

This probably doesn't make much sense... And probably is not as I used to comment on your great fics... But I was so surprised to see this update of yours... So stunned at the great one-shot you just posted... I seriously can't find the right words to even start to describe how I feel about it...

Just so you know that I loved it &hearts *hugs you and inhale the scent of your hair* Almost as much as I love you!!! *chuu~~*

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on 2010-10-24 03:12 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
oooo (hi i am a new reader)

VERY adorable I have to say! LOL at Kame tugging at Jinjin's hair :)

please do continue :D arigatou

on 2010-10-24 09:46 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Domo~ to a new reader ^_^

Thank you for reading this.

And... continue what? O_o

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on 2010-10-24 03:13 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
beautiful! the way u write it is just beautiful...

"Because this man can only co-exist with someone who can be on the same wave with him"

this. although is so simple, i love it.

thanks for sharing..=)

on 2010-10-24 09:53 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
I'm surprised and happy to see someone like my style ^_^

Thank you for reading this)

on 2010-10-24 03:18 am (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile]
Ooooohhh.. this was so good. If you were saving yourself for coming back, this definitely did it. I totally adore the style of this one, the setting and the mood and everything. And it was exactly like you said, it was perfect in a very cozy ordinary intimate kind of way.

For some reason, I fell in love with the first part, on the plane. The description made by this random woman's POV of the whole situation was great. and then, how could I not fall in love with asleep defenseless exhausted Kame being joined in bed by Jin?

It felt really personal. And I loved it &hearts. And I love YOU &hearts&hearts&hearts

on 2010-10-24 10:02 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Oh god, I think I'm gonna blush here x_x Because it really is personal, right?
I want them to be like that. and, darn it, I want Kame to sleep more. Yet, Jin's sleepy too; I know, this guy gets severely jet-lagged, there was one time when he flew all the way to Hawaii, only to sleep there for three days long, because he couldn't stand the time difference. Such a girl <3

Gah~, boy, I missed them both.

P.S. I know people don't need them, but I want you to take a star ★.
I give because I can ^_^

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on 2010-10-24 03:33 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
aww.. Kame's so cute when he's dead asleep. x3 poor woman, I didn't know if I can still be a sane girl if I sit beside him in a plane.
and Jiiin~ adorable <3
your beautiful way of wording.. I really love it.
thanks for sharing!

on 2010-10-24 10:04 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Well, she is a mother already. She can't lose her dignity in front of hundreds of people in the plane XDD

I'm so glad to know you like my style. It means really a lot to me, it does ^_^

on 2010-10-24 04:52 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
♥♥♥lovely♥♥♥ XD

on 2010-10-24 10:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Thank you!! 8D

on 2010-10-24 05:08 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
short but soooo deep.. lovely!!!

thank you...

p/s: should i say 'welcome back', dear?? <3333

on 2010-10-24 10:06 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
It is, right? ^__^
Thank you for reading this))

Oh, let's not run before the train....... This was just a sudden urge ¬__¬

on 2010-10-24 06:19 am (UTC)
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on 2010-10-24 10:07 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Thank you ^_^ and I will think about it)

on 2010-10-24 06:19 am (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile]
Yes, continue this like it
thank u

on 2010-10-24 10:08 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Oh, thank you))
I'll consider thinking it over ^_^

on 2010-10-24 06:27 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Wow, I'm so happy you have decided to write again Akame!
I would have been really sad otherwise, your stories are so beautiful..

I loved this one, I identified a lot with the woman in the airplane, how come you thought about this kind of character?

Thank you ^_^

on 2010-10-24 10:13 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
I guess I was on the dangerous line of declining them both ¬__¬ yet, here we are, with this tiny-tiny drabble.

Thank you so much for reading and being interested o_o Actually, you surprised me with this question. I don't even know. I only get a general picture in my head but when I start writing, only then I get to describe all the beloved details... The woman was born in a fraction of second and just continued to live in my head from then on ^_^
Get a star for your question, because there's no human being who ever misses a chance to talk about himself; ★ 8D

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on 2010-10-24 07:51 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
please do continue this. thank you!

on 2010-10-24 10:14 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
*stares at your icon*

Thank you for reading, surprised to see an Arashi!fan here 8D

on 2010-10-24 10:47 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Awwwww WELCOME BACK! I loved it, it's really nice, bittersweet in someway, I don't even know.
And I loved the last sentence :)
Welcome back *hugs*

on 2010-10-24 10:15 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Ahh~, how fast you go there with the judgements... x__x It's not a come-back yet, I'm sadly leaving very soon((((

And, oh, I like the last sentence too ^__^

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on 2010-10-24 01:26 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
wow...short, but as always, good. this gave me a warm sensation. ^-^

on 2010-10-24 10:16 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
It did~? 8D I'm happy, because it gives that sensation to me too.

Thank you for reading)))

on 2010-10-24 03:30 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
thats kinda nice.. hehe~

on 2010-10-24 10:17 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Though, sadly, your comment makes me doubt so.. Yet, thank you)

on 2010-10-24 08:33 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
so wonderful and touching
i hope you do continue this
thank you so much for sharing

on 2010-10-24 10:21 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
I'm really happy to know that it was touching))) Thank you so much and I hope I'll get in the mood again ^__^

on 2010-10-24 11:56 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Aaaah, this is too... awesome?
Is like a dream (or at least that's what it felt while I was reading it) but they are all awake.

Thanks for writing and sharing it!

on 2010-10-25 06:12 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
I hope the fact that it was similar to a dream didn't startle you ^_^ Thank you for reading this)))

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on 2010-10-25 10:08 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
this is fabulous. lovely and gorgeous. I love the way we see the Kame, the way the fellow passenger sees him, the tiredness makes me want to cuddle him...and Jin's reaction is fabulous too. I loved this one, did I mention it was fabulous? :)

on 2010-10-25 08:06 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
Oh~ and you're no less wonderful too, for reading this, dear

obligatory star for you

on 2010-10-25 08:50 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
ooh god how much I missing you AkaKame's fics!!
And I love tihs one! Sweet and kinda eeh i want to say realistic lmaao. :DD only because I can totally imagine this.

on 2010-10-26 06:32 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile]
adorable... please continue...

definitely want more XD

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